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Medical Tourism

The term medical tourism may sound like an oxymoron for people who aren’t familiar with it, as tourism has no relationship with a person’s medical needs and neither does an individuals’ medical condition have anything concerned with tourism. However this term does not imply the aforementioned point, as medical tourism is used to described those individuals’ who travel abroad in order to undergo considerably expensive surgeries or other procedures which would otherwise cost a much greater amount in their own country. The second main reason for medical tourism to be prevalent is because of the lack of sufficient health care facilities in a certain country, and thereby compelling the patients who need to receive certain treatments to travel abroad.
One of the most successful fields of medical tourism in the world today is for dental care, as thousands of patients travel abroad in order to receive new dental crowns, dental implants, mouth reconstructions and other related services at literally halve the cost they would need to incur in their own country. Just as any other form of travel, a person requiring travelling abroad for medical purposes needs to obtain the assistance from a travel organization that is specialized in sending people abroad for medical needs. This is because, it’s essential for the patient to show valid evidence that he/she requires such medical treatment which is either not available in their country or exceeds ones financial budget by leaps and bounds. Thereafter the relevant authorities who examine the respective documents and issue the medical visa for the patient to visit the country for the agreed period of time stipulated by the doctor in both locations.


อยากทราบว่า Grammar แบบนี้พอใช้ได้ไหมครับ ผมไม่ค่อยเชี่ยวชาญด้านภาษาอังกฤษเลย อันนี้ตัวอย่างเขาส่งให้ดูครับ

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The term medical tourism may sound like an oxymoron for people who aren't familiar with it, as tourism has no relationship with a person's medical needs and neither does an individual's medical condition have anything concerned with tourism, However term does not imply the aforementioned point, as medical tourism is used to described those individuals' who travel abroad in order to undergo considerably expensive surgeries or other procedures which would otherwise cost a much greater amount in their own country. The second main reason for medical tourism to be prevalent is because of the lack of sufficient health care facilities in a certain country, and thereby compelling the patients who need to receive certain treatments to travel abroad. One of the most successful fields of medical tourism in the world today is for dental care, as thousands of patients travel abroad in order to receive new dental crowns, dental implants, mouth reconstructions and other related services at literally halve the cost they would need to incur in their own country. Just as any other form of travel, a person requiring travelling abroad for medical purposes needs to obtain the assistance from a travels organization that is specialized in sending people abroad for medical needs. This is because, it's essential for the patient to show valid evidence that he/she requires such medical treatment, which is either not available in their country or exceeds one financial budget by leaps and bounds, Thereafter the relevant authorities who examine the respective documents and issue the medical visa for the patient to visit the country for the agreed period of time stipulated by the doctor in both locations.

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สรุปคือไม่ work ใช่ไหมครับคนนี้...

ใช้ word เช็คได้ค่ะ

ถ้าไม่ work ผมจะได้ไม่จ้างต่อครับผม  :P

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The term medical tourism may sound like an oxymoron for people who aren't familiar with it, as tourism has no relationship with a person's medical needs and neither does an individual's medical condition have anything concerned with tourism.

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หรือลองพิมพ์ medical Tourism จาก google อ่านและเข้าใจง่ายกว่าตัวอย่างที่ให้มาค่ะ :wanwan005: